39. Pitch Feedback

Pitch Feedback

Throughout the presentation we aim to get across our pitch imaginatively by using visuals and detailed information about our scenes these include variety of features that contributed to making our pitch a success some of these were mise-en-scene, audience, risk assessments and many more.

After successfully getting our pitch across with we received comments and critiques on how we could do better or what went well. Below is feedback that we collected from our peers.

Firstly our teacher feedback was we need to adjust the target audience from 16-25 to a more specific range - our argument to this is that the film has a cast of these ages where both 16 & 25 year olds come together and merge their lifestyles. We will be changing this, however. 

Group 36

Pros:

1. The presentation was very detailed and well presented to the audience
2. Group 39 was prepared with many different type of examples for the audience to understand thoroughly

Cons:

1.  more visuals and less time consuming so shorten the time length of the presentation keep to a minimal.

Questions:

1. How would you attract your target market/audience?

Marks:

9/10

Group 37

Pros:

1. The presentation was well thought out and detailed but as well explained in all key areas
2. The storyline of the pitch was a good plot and intriguing.

Cons:

1. The presentation was quite long compared to others

Question:

No questions for the group

Marks:

15/10

  Group 38

Pros:

1.  The presentation was very detailed and well presented to the audience
2. There were very good examples included and well explained.

Cons:

No comments about cons

Question:

No questions for the group

Marks:

10/10

 

Marisa gave pur pitch 9/10 and said our pitch was very good and 'nearly perfect'. However she said to have gotten 10/10 we needed to explain more about our target audience.

In light of this we decided to make a age range more specific to 16-21 year olds as we feel they fit this genre (Teen Drama) 

Most of the feedback we got from the groups was very good and positive, so there wasnt much critism in what we could change about our pitch and ideas.