Our Feedback was that the storyboard was fine how it was. Although we could add some more detailed scenes
We have decided to change the name of our opening from 'The Pursuit' to 'Garage 32'. We have decided to change our idea of what is going to be exchanged between the young girl and the male. We thought it would be a more interesting idea to have a key or memory stick as the exchanged item instead of the usual drugs or money. This key would then be significant to the garage where we will end our scene.
We are also going to chnage the ending of our scene. We are not going to end our scene with the bus scene but we will end it at a garage where it will then black out.
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