We have revised our pitch and feedback.
We decided to make some decisions and change a few things,
Firstly we decided that 'The Pursuit' wasn't a suitable name for an independent film as it sounds like a hollywood production. We have changed the Title to Garage 32b.
This leads to our second change, the story. Instead of a mysterious envelope we will have a key with the tag 'Garage 32b' on it, instead of the girl collecting an envelope she will collect this.
Another change would be that the ending will be different, instead of a blackout and a sound of a car horn we will have the girl drop the key and not realise until her pursuer is long gone.
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